A nice trance jingle, I call it "jingle" as it is currently a little short to be classed as a full song in my opinion but that is just my opinion. I felt that the strong start made it feel like you were walking into a club just after a drop, missing the build up. I'm not sure this is a good thing, maybe consider adding a build up for a while before this and relegating this to just the main meat and potatoes of the track.
For what is here it's of a good quality with just the right amount of business to keep the listener interested but I would neaten up the editing to get rid of the silence at the end, which goes on for just a bit too long. Especially as this isn't a loop.
All in all it's a good start. I'd keep editing and adding more and see where you get with this.