It was a good idea, but......
...I feel that the flash would have been greatly improved if the options lead to a longer sequence or many be more choices. Like I said it was a good idea but I think that you could have made it better.
It was a good idea, but......
...I feel that the flash would have been greatly improved if the options lead to a longer sequence or many be more choices. Like I said it was a good idea but I think that you could have made it better.
True, but you see it's a project for school.. deadlines and stuff. I told myself that this is really basic. But someone's gonna start somewhere right? besides I suck at
drawing stuff.. :))
Creepy Undertone
I in general liked this flash. I thought that it was well writen and had some great visual gags in it. The only thing that I would have improved on was the quality of the voice over, it sounds a little fuzzy.
Other then that its a great flash.
4/5
Thanks for reviewing and I'm glad you liked it!
Really Good
Great idea, I liked the layout and all the art in it is great (other then mine which is embarrassing). Couldn't be improved, well done to all involved :).
Thanks!
Hmmm.....
It's ok but theres not enough. Maybe you should of made it with some more of Alan's lines or from the whole cast. I remember it being a good movie, there's bound to of been plenty.
2/5
well thanks, yur comment isnt as negative as the rest. i jus made this ina computer class for a simple grade, nd was told to put this thinhg up here. oh well
Not bad, not bad.
Your description says you did this as training, its shows a good understanding of flash and is a nice, short and enntertaining loop. Keep at it and you'll produce something great in the future, I have no doubt.
4/5
Woah, thanks a lot for the words, it really motivated me, i might try some classic animation after that. Thanks a lot!
Not Too Bad
This shows some quite good animation skills but you let yourself down with the shear lengh of it. If it had been twice, maybe three times as long and had more of a plot to it this could have been great. In future I'd say plan your flashs more.
3/5
yeah i know ....
im trying to get a mic right now by doing sum house work and trailer repairs so i can get some cash to get one .
really i actually made my self angry when i watched this a few times ... i felt it could have been more .
oh and thanks !
Hmmmm.
I like the randomness of this Flash for starters. I think it was let down however by the lack of substance and the sheer amount of footage you have used from a game, both these things give me the impression that you thought of this idea one day and then spent the rest of that day making this. In future I'd spend more time planning out your Flashes. For what it is its not bad though.
3/5
The randomness was on purpose. :3
Yeah, you're pretty much right on the dot! It was a random decision on one occasion. BUT, it took me dayyyyyys to do this because i had less than an hour each time i revisited flash. lol
so yeah, all the stuff you see is on purpose and just for kicks.
Im surprised it even got a 3. anything!
.........So
How many times have america won the World Cup?
As for the flash its nothing special. It needed more then just a song and the word goal panning across the screen.
Good attempt
It was sometimes hard to see what the shapes were ment to be, should have been slower. But it must have taken some time. Good effort.
>.<! the guy who rated two says it should be faster!!!
Anyway, thanks for the input. I evolve as a flash artist when I am given reviews like this. Thanks!
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