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An interesting and entertaining animation.

The jokes were humorous and the animation was quite smooth. I would have liked to have seen more time taken towards the smaller artist details, a faint scaly texture on the skin of the T-Rexs for example, the general feel of the cartoon is good though and these are minor improvement suggestions.

Keep it up and I'll hopefully be seeing more of your animations soon.

Just amazing. I love the way you've drawn the character's expressions, a great source of visual comedy, similar to the drawing style of Oney or Psychicpebbles.

At some parts I felt like the graphics could have been improved, for example the bosses left arm (viewers left) looks very thin. There are only a few instances of these kinds of thing, so it really isn't much to pick at. The audio is a little off too but you have addressed this in the Author Comments.

When the dog put his hat on, I swear, I nearly fell off my chair. Brilliant writing.

Keep it up

TrohPee responds:

Thanks for the nice detailed review dude. It's been awhile since I made this, but its always nice to see it made someone laugh ;3
~ Keep it sleezy ,xoxo Trohpee

First impressions are important, I could see myself voting one or two when I saw those pyramids. It would have been better to start with something more visually exciting, for example a few panning shoots of the tanks before they start and the music kicks in.

It is also noticeable that the tanks don't have any animation, such as moving tracks and they're of a completely different style to the "war machine". I like the simple style of the war machine, you should have just replicated that with the tanks.

The typography needed work. Well, I think you just grabbed a default font, a simple mask to make the text distorted, if used subtly, would be an improvement.

I liked the idea of this flash and it could have been an interesting short so maybe I've been kind but the war machine has me heart now, with his little oil barrel.

I like the sketch feel design of the animation and the lip syncing of the characters, though the memes popping up I could have lived without, though that's just not my humour.

I like the scenario and the jokes are funny but I feel that if your going to have a still background stays on screen as long as the one around your computer character then more time should have been spent on the design, to make it more visually pleasing. I would have liked to have seen more detail here and would have gone as far as to do it around the spaceman character.

It's not a bad little toon but your missing out by not working on your visuals.

So many phallic symbols! It a bombardment of the stiff and erect that only the loosest Magaluf bar girl would be accustomed to.

Just when I thought I'd seen the last from the land of truly penetrating headgear along comes Raw Latex 3. Would the USB strap-on be used for transporting viruses? Always a good aggressive strategy providing you can find a place to dock.

Funny jokes, smooth animation, great music, spot-on voice acting.
Here's hoping for a fourth episode.

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks! as you say, it would be a specialty strap on with limited use.

I like it, a nice little short with good added details like the houses behind The orange Batman guy. I always like to see odd touches like that on amateur animations, it makes me wonder what proportion of the time you spent drawing backgrounds.

The story is good, the tree falling at the end adds, though I can't get passed the fact that it loops. If I were you I would have either made the loop have a credits page that stays for 4 - 5 seconds or with a simple bit of auto-script you can get the flash to stop at the end and add a reply button for example. This would be the next logical step in your improvement. On another note the explosion just didn't work for you visually but practice makes perfect.

Hope to see more in the future, best of luck.

Good, clean and smooth animation reminiscent of the classic Looney Tunes cartoons. The little touches like the way Dracula swooshes his cape to get into his pajamas are inspired. Add to this well drawn backgrounds and you're on to a winner.

There are a couple of things I would have changed, for example at 01:16 Dracula is shown to be up from being thrown across the room a little too quickly, I would have inserted a couple of frames of him getting up to establish he didn't just land on his feet. Another thing would be the view from the fly's eyes at 01:55 which you have as multicoloured and I think would work better as black and white of sepia.

It's a good cartoon, keep it up.

It's always a treat to catch up on Gooseman's and his antics, especially when said antics involve jugs full of urine, a talking Mexican panda and legendary levels of lettuce leaf lobbing. Good to Fernando make an appearance skulking around in full bondage attire as well.

The animation is smooth as well as sharp and the jokes are that great mix of dark and exquisitely random that has become a stable of your work. As always upon watching this I'm instantly wanting the next, truly one of the best active animators on Newgrounds.

Greatest respect and admiration

Sexual-Lobster responds:

thanks a lot!

A Nice bit of 3D animation. I would have liked to have seen more texture and detail on the character and I'm not sure about the lighting, I get that it's meant to be dark but maybe it's too much.

Is there meant to be a fire? I get that impression but it's not that clear. Also the yellow stuff he's sat on/in, wax? Other things I find the use of unclear are the back of the hand, visible from 00:29 to 00:46 they seem to be concave. Maybe spend more time building him and making sure there's no weird dips and bumps that don't add to the creepy but just look like a mistake. On a similar vein there's a jerky hand movement at 00:58 that could do with some attention.

3D can be a challenge but this isn't a bad stab at it. With more time spent in the planning/writing stage and practice on your technique you could do a lot better.

Brilliantly smooth animation, a good use of perspective with blur to make the image seem 3D and a humorous ending. There's little to point out for improvement here and if I'm honest I'm struggling to find something to highlight. Maybe i would have made the creatures irises more circular but that really is nothing.

One of the best things that I've seen on here in mouths.
The highest praise to you. Keep it up.

Graphic designer for hire. If you want something designing give me a PM and I'll get back to you.

Decky Doughty @Decky

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Graphic Designer

University of Chester

Northwich, England

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